Now with copper tone bottom!

UGH! I so need to finish this. I have so may other things I want to do. Anyway, I got co-workers to crit it and they added this...

-I need to add a focal point. Even if i'm just going to have the tunnel repeat you need to have something fill up that black space. it throws off your crit.

-to need some accent colors. Proabaly Green and purple to contrast the warm yellows and browns you have going on. (I like this one, i nice excuse to bring in slimy algae.)

-you need to tune you "god rays" they create a strange 'slash' in your composition.

-you may need a rim light for objects in the foreground to make them pop a little more.

- the overall image is a bit too dark. You may need more contrast in some areas

- the top of the tunnel is too bright, reverse it with the bottom which is too dark

all in all a good crit.

just need to post this here for cgtalk

I need help something does not feel right.

Lighting is done and I'm happy

I finally finished lighting everything and I'm pretty happy. I may need to bring back the soft ambient light I deleted out but overall this is good. Now i just need to texture, texture, texture.

oh and here's a random doodle from me. god i need to draw more. I really miss it.

Figured it out.

quick note. figured out the problem. It was bad lighting and really bad reference. Now that that has been figured out i can move forward. The large pipes are gonna need 3 different variants though.